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SFF Author * Engineer * Mom

Back from Seeing Alpha Centauri

Summer vacation this year took us to Peru, where we greatly enjoyed experiencing another culture and exploring the Inca ruins, including the magnificent Machu Picchu. I also enjoyed photographing the moon and stars that can only be seen in the Southern Hemisphere. The Southern Cross looks like a kite to me.

View from our Lima hotel room:

Peru-Lima-View

View from our Cusco hotel room:

Peru-Cusco-View

View from our Aguas Calientes hotel room:

Peru-Aguas-View

Moon through Inca doorway:

Peru-Door-Moon

Shadow Selfie with Moon and Inca Stonework:

Peru-Self-Moon

Moon with Inca Stonework:

Peru-Stone-Moon

Moon over Urubamba River with stone piles:

Peru-River-Moon

Southern Stars from Aguas Calientes – Southern Cross and Alpha Centauri:

Peru-Stars-2Peru-Stars-1

Machu Picchu:

Peru-MP-1APeru-MP-2Peru-MP-3Peru-MP-1Peru-MP-4

Killing Your Darlings

There’s a phrase used in writing that you have to “kill your darlings”.  I don’t think that means that if you like something, you should automatically cut it.  What I do think it means is that if something isn’t working for the story, even if you love it, you have to cut it. 

While editing my current WIP, I realized that I was letting the main character off the hook in the middle of the story and that the tension died at that point.  The way I let her off the hook had some funny lines that I really liked.  I didn’t want to cut them.  But I did.  And it worked—the tension increased.

Are you willing to kill your darlings?

January Stats

This was a month of editing: totally rewrote one story and started a simpler revision on a second.  Editing drove my words/hours down, but I did achieve the mythical hour a day on average, although I didn’t quite succeed at writing every day.  How was your January?

WORDS WRITTEN: 4371

HOURS SPENT WRITING: 32

WORDS/HOUR: 136.6